Forum: Great Reads!  11-17-2006, 10:38 AM |
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 hi
nope, neva heard of it, you ever read the wicca series, by cate tiernan, its cool, depends on your age, i guess its an easy read, but i stil got pretty ino , it, if ure into wicca n' stuff, magic...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 11-17-2006, 10:31 AM |
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 Window
Dont you just love it when things pop into your head. Here we go:
Peoples eyes are peoples hearts,
Easy to enter and easy to part,
I see the embers,
In the ashes,
I see coarse will ressurected,...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 11-08-2006, 05:31 PM |
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 lol
reminds me too much of my life. you have good rythm, something a lot of people find hard to grasp, beat, it gives poems flow and you capture it. hehe, love it.
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 11-07-2006, 09:58 AM |
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Something i came up with during cross country.
So,
In this world,
There is no voice,
No choice,
Can not rejoice,
Friend, comrade, delinquent,
Hearty suffering,
Shuff-el-ing down coridors,
White as all things purity,
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-30-2006, 02:16 PM |
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Its in the Stars
Let me wake up eleven at seven fifteen,
Eyes groggy with sleep,
With my best friend beside me,
On my first day of high school,
Saying,
I can give anything for you,
And one last hug,
A bracelet...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-30-2006, 02:08 PM |
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Its in the stars
Wish on a million falling stars,
That this fate corrupted will end,
Tell me strings of future star allignmnents,
Attatched to me,
Have segments of happiness waiting,
And pray on a million...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-30-2006, 01:49 PM |
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woah
when first joined teen lit i chucked on everything i had wich was loads and most of it was pretty crap, so its amazing that youve managed to put so many on and for them all to be incredibly good. i...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-20-2006, 01:10 PM |
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 K. I feel mean. I know you can't force someone...
K. I feel mean.
I know you can't force someone too look on the brighter side of something that doesnt have another side to be brighter, and i know people yelling at you to be happy doesnt help. but...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-14-2006, 06:29 PM |
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So F-Ing Bored
I mean astonishing,
Perplexing,
Completely nausiating,
I have too much inside inside of me,
I want to burst and i want to scream,
And i want to have some fun.
So there.
God i'm so f-ing bored.
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-13-2006, 06:16 PM |
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Luck Too Late
Like etching angels into corpses,
The luck is too late,
Fate already siezed them,
Has them in a cage,
Like saying thankyou,
For all they've done for you,
At the funeral,
Like crossing fingers and...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-12-2006, 09:56 AM |
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Ok, try this: For the last almost, three years...
Ok, try this:
For the last almost, three years almost every day someone has been nasty to me, evry day someone, mainl a couple idiots insult you like you walk to school with a sign on ue 4head that...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-10-2006, 03:32 PM |
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aww
thats so beautiful
i agree isis
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-09-2006, 02:03 PM |
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Statue
In my dream the statues had a hard decision to make.
Be stone on the inside and flesh on exterior,
To be dead and ugly rot in their prime years,
Or blood and life on the internal side,
And be...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-09-2006, 01:58 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-01-2006, 05:41 AM |
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hi
ha, i like it, its simple, the whole thing sounds like a sigh, its cool, erm have 2 ask just in case i got this wrong. is the character gay, or something...??
Anyways, i like ure poem
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| Forum: Long Term Writing 09-28-2006, 09:34 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-26-2006, 12:43 PM |
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Adrenaline Rush-Honest i'm not devil
Adrenaline rush,
I'm dragged away by puppy dog eyes,
And insistent pleas,
I have a problem with saying no,
So i go,
My hands can't stay still,
And my face is red and,
Ouch,
Hot to the touch,
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-26-2006, 12:34 PM |
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hey
owch thats sad. god its not tru is it??
Well, the rhyming was good, clever, and it had cinsistancy, but you need to cut out the line, "my life is gay", right now.
Also swearing more than once, kinda...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-18-2006, 03:44 PM |
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 09-18-2006, 03:34 PM |
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Catty Johnson snippit
(Excuse my typing errors, theres probably quite a few...)
She strode into the six form common room like she was royalty. Her stance, the way she surveyed the room of students, and the satisfied...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-17-2006, 04:07 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-15-2006, 12:58 PM |
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 Pink Feather
K, i'm a city girl, live in london in a one bedrom flat with a garden which we share with our neighbour, and i have three chickens, a cock, and two hens, i had a chick, just one, and the real mum n...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-10-2006, 02:50 PM |
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oh
don't the pain killers help? icky about the acid
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-10-2006, 02:46 PM |
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..
They are going to take care of them selves.
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-07-2006, 02:38 PM |
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 huh
of course you have hope. arent you hoping hell say something heart breakingly romantic, like he couldnt tell you cause he couldnt facee it to break your heart? Arent you hoping if you just ignore...
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