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Old 10-13-2006, 06:16 PM   #1
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Default Luck Too Late

Like etching angels into corpses,
The luck is too late,
Fate already siezed them,
Has them in a cage,
Like saying thankyou,
For all they've done for you,
At the funeral,

Like crossing fingers and toes,
To undo a promise that was spoken,
And there for can not be un commited by a gesture,
The luck is too late,
Fate already siezed them
"I wrote how the first science was made by magic..."

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Old 10-20-2006, 01:36 AM   #2
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I love it. Hope all is going well, just keep smiling! I kno it sounds dumb, but sometimes you have too.
Like a drifter I was born to walk alone....
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