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Forum: Great Reads! 06-04-2006, 06:44 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 26
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
I just read it, it was good for an age range like...

I just read it, it was good for an age range like 9-13 or something.

Well written though..and nice plot.
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-04-2006, 06:43 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 10
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Pinned against the Earth.

PIN ME TO THE eARTH AND i AM,
(ME) WE ARE PaPEr - WHiTE PAPeR - DOLLS.
SnIPPED OUt OF (--sssnick!--) a LITtLE MORe THAN (what matters?) mATTER.
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-04-2006, 06:33 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 8
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
I really love the message of it. Its awesome, and...

I really love the message of it. Its awesome, and I love it when those poems just pop into your head out of the middle of nowhere! Thats the best...
Forum: Great Reads! 05-08-2006, 02:24 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 36
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
There was a big big thread on it back a while...

There was a big big thread on it back a while ago.

I've read them and yeah, in the first book I was quiet turned off my the tolkienesque mythology and stuff with the shade and other ocr like...
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 05-08-2006, 01:44 PM
Replies: 8
Views: 886
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Yeah. Is there a rule list around? Is swearing...

Yeah. Is there a rule list around? Is swearing offlimits? I mean..when it is neccesary...not just blurting out obscenities or anything. And obviously no degrading racism, sexist, stuff..
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-08-2006, 01:40 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 29
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
air on air.

I should be asleep.
Iím not (nocturnal).
But this house is dark
And Iím awake by the windÖ
By its whisper of touch and the caress of

air
on
air
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-08-2006, 09:49 AM
Replies: 23
Views: 435
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Its cool! I love it how I don't know what the...

Its cool!

I love it how I don't know what the hell it is! Thats what dreams are..nice job putting it to paper.

xo
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-08-2006, 09:47 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 54
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Very nice, Isis. I love the sixteen damn years...

Very nice, Isis.



I love the sixteen damn years part. Ahh.

Your imagery I didn't find confusing at all. I liked it a lot. You used it nicely too. It wasn't cliche, it made sense, and tied into the...
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-08-2006, 09:41 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 56
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
I get inspiration from other kids work. Online,...

I get inspiration from other kids work. Online, if I stumble across really good poetry thats what fires me up.
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-08-2006, 09:40 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 164
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Yeah, you say you're sorry but are you going to...

Yeah, you say you're sorry but are you going to listen and get some good advice on how to improve your writing???
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-08-2006, 09:38 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 43
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Cool. I feel powerful. Erm, I'm so...glad for...

Cool. I feel powerful.



Erm, I'm so...glad for you.



Exactly. Make me see it. I can see the patches of you passion for writing waiting to come out, and I can see the raw intensity that you write...
Forum: Poetry For Review 05-05-2006, 09:19 AM
Replies: 11
Views: 164
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
WHOA! GIRLONFIRE! Listen to Unwilling!! She/He...

WHOA! GIRLONFIRE! Listen to Unwilling!! She/He has some VERY good points that I agree wholly with. If you can't take sharp criticsism don't be here. Unwilling is trying to help you with your poetry...
Forum: Great Reads! 05-05-2006, 09:13 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 85
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
I actually have gained a dislike for her writing....

I actually have gained a dislike for her writing. Its all the same after the Princess Diaries. Blegh.
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 05-02-2006, 02:18 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 430
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Hah. No. Its not scary, but the girl is raped and...

Hah. No. Its not scary, but the girl is raped and murdered. Soo..a differant sort of scary! Its really well written though.
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 05-01-2006, 11:31 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 430
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Its a good read. My mom was appalled when she...

Its a good read. My mom was appalled when she picked it up though :P Hehe.
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 04-24-2006, 09:11 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 430
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Peter Jackson is doing the Lovely Bones?! I...

Peter Jackson is doing the Lovely Bones?!

I have GOT to see that.
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 04-23-2006, 09:19 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 430
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
You mean Zathura?

You mean Zathura?
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 04-20-2006, 09:14 AM
Replies: 58
Views: 430
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Yeah thats the gymnastics movie. Its loks great,...

Yeah thats the gymnastics movie. Its loks great, does it not? I'm also a fan of motercross so thats awesome too.
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 04-19-2006, 12:54 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 430
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Oh man I just saw Ice Age 2 and I was so...

Oh man I just saw Ice Age 2 and I was so devistated that Scrat didn't stay in acorn heaven! I was so pissed! Haha. Some movies I'm looking forward too:

Paridise Now
The Child
Everything is...
Forum: Contests, Calls, & other Publishing Opportunities 04-19-2006, 09:51 AM
Replies: 0
Views: 108
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
New writers/artists forum out there...

[URL="http://existenz.14.forumer.com"]

The above is a new forum thats just started...go there and I encourage you to go to the writing section and share your critiques and writing as well. My...
Forum: Poetry For Review 04-13-2006, 05:16 PM
Replies: 6
Views: 101
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Welcome! I can tell you'll be a grea addition to...

Welcome! I can tell you'll be a grea addition to teenlit. I liked how your wrote the poem, listen to Isis about the use of words thing..she knows what she's doing! Haha. Anyway, the poem was...
Forum: Poetry For Review 04-13-2006, 05:12 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 52
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
YES. I really like this a lot. Its not to...

YES. I really like this a lot. Its not to metphorical or packed with crazy imagery or feeling or anything which as you know I usually like! But this was nice and simple. /woot/
Forum: Poetry For Review 04-13-2006, 05:04 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 54
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Nice, I feel ya!

Nice, I feel ya!
Forum: Poetry For Review 04-13-2006, 05:01 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 49
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Yep, its probably better then if your teacher...

Yep, its probably better then if your teacher made you write this is some strict format or something and this is a good write in the sense that you are getting the message across, but to make it...
Forum: Poetry For Review 04-11-2006, 09:18 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 49
Posted By ~swissmochafudge~
Good motivation. Keep at it. But the poem was a...

Good motivation. Keep at it. But the poem was a little iffy this time, first off you need to watch your spelling and punctuation. Read some other published poems in an anthology or something and...
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