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Old 06-04-2006, 09:28 AM   #1
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This is short, i was just walking home from school with no apparent inspiration and this just kinda popped into my head:

I realised,
I was born on clouds,
I was raised by angels,
And was dropped on earths door step,
I'm heaven bound,
And earth ground,
And so i am devine,

???Any comments????
I'm like an atom,
So small you can not see me,
Try and split me,
And i'm not so little anymore...
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Old 06-04-2006, 06:33 PM   #2
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I really love the message of it. Its awesome, and I love it when those poems just pop into your head out of the middle of nowhere! Thats the best...
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