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 06-04-2006, 09:28 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2006
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 Angels
This is short, i was just walking home from school with no apparent inspiration and this just kinda popped into my head:
I realised, I was born on clouds, I was raised by angels, And was dropped on earths door step, I'm heaven bound, And earth ground, And so i am devine, ???Any comments????
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06-04-2006, 06:33 PM
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Join Date: May 2005
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I really love the message of it. Its awesome, and I love it when those poems just pop into your head out of the middle of nowhere! Thats the best...
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