To the people who smile when they should cry

girlonfire · 04-12-2006, 07:43 AM

To the people who smile when they should cry,
And cry when they should smile,
To the people who love where they should hate,
You're less and more human than most,
You take morality,
Over instict,
You take chance,
Rather than fact,
You take death,
For justice,
You take death,
With a spoon full of sugar,

Ameerah8 · 04-12-2006, 07:13 PM

I like this poem. lol At the last line my brain just automatically said "makes the medicine go down." but for some reason this poem just sticks out to me.....dnon, maybe it's me but bravo either way. and BTW mary poppins is awesome. lol

girlonfire · 04-13-2006, 07:58 AM

exactly, mary poppins...i dont know y i put that in....glad u lliked it anyways...oh yeah it was something about death being the medicine....

~swissmochafudge~ · 04-13-2006, 05:12 PM

YES. I really like this a lot. Its not to metphorical or packed with crazy imagery or feeling or anything which as you know I usually like! But this was nice and simple. /woot/

04-12-2006, 07:43 AM	#1
girlonfire TeenLit Regular Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 72	To the people who smile when they should cry To the people who smile when they should cry, And cry when they should smile, To the people who love where they should hate, You're less and more human than most, You take morality, Over instict, You take chance, Rather than fact, You take death, For justice, You take death, With a spoon full of sugar, __________________ I'm like an atom, So small you can not see me, Insignificant? Try and split me, And i'm not so little anymore...

04-12-2006, 07:13 PM	#2
Ameerah8 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 214	I like this poem. lol At the last line my brain just automatically said "makes the medicine go down." but for some reason this poem just sticks out to me.....dnon, maybe it's me but bravo either way. and BTW mary poppins is awesome. lol __________________ Birds of a feather flock together, And so will pigs and swine; Rats and mice can have their choice And so will I have mine.

04-13-2006, 07:58 AM	#3
girlonfire TeenLit Regular Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 72	yeah exactly, mary poppins...i dont know y i put that in....glad u lliked it anyways...oh yeah it was something about death being the medicine.... __________________ I'm like an atom, So small you can not see me, Insignificant? Try and split me, And i'm not so little anymore...

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04-13-2006, 05:12 PM	#4
~swissmochafudge~ Senior Member Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 156	YES. I really like this a lot. Its not to metphorical or packed with crazy imagery or feeling or anything which as you know I usually like! But this was nice and simple. /woot/