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Forum: Poetry For Review 11-08-2006, 06:21 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 130
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
haha, thanks! Well, this was actually a song at...

haha, thanks! Well, this was actually a song at first, so that might be where the rhythm comes from.
Forum: The Reader's Lounge 11-04-2006, 01:18 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 223
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
Ron/Hermione: Perfect couple. I always hoped they...

Ron/Hermione: Perfect couple. I always hoped they would realize their love for each other, but it was so obvious in the 6th book.

Harry/Ginny: Eh. It's really cute, and I don't exactly hate it or...
Forum: The Writer's Lounge 11-03-2006, 07:02 PM
Replies: 16
Views: 568
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
To be quite honest, both. I love feedback,...

To be quite honest, both. I love feedback, because I really want to know what I can improve on and what's "good" or "bad". I love seeing what others think of my writing. Also, if I think I wrote...
Forum: Book For School 10-31-2006, 11:43 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 83
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
Fahrenheit 451

I recently had to read the story Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury, and it really wasn't that bad. Actually, once I understood everything that was going on and analyzed it a bit more in class, I wanted...
Forum: Suggestions, Feedback & Questions 10-31-2006, 11:36 PM
Replies: 29
Views: 2,174
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
google. I searched 'teen writers' and this place...

google. I searched 'teen writers' and this place came up! I'm so glad I found it!
Forum: Poetry For Review 10-31-2006, 06:37 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 118
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
No, you misunderstood me. I wouldn't be able to...

No, you misunderstood me. I wouldn't be able to live without similies and metaphors! What I was saying was that I just pour out what's on my mind right at first. Just all of my thoughts, everything...
Forum: Short Stories For Review 10-30-2006, 11:28 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 193
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
Your descriptions are amazing. Especially at the...

Your descriptions are amazing. Especially at the beginning; I felt right in the story. You did a great job! Ok, so some constructive criticism: It seemed rushed starting out when we found out the...
Forum: Short Stories For Review 10-30-2006, 11:20 PM
Replies: 14
Views: 2,110
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
I think it sounds like a fantastic plot! I'm...

I think it sounds like a fantastic plot! I'm really interested in reading it; I don't exactly know any publishers, so I'm sorry I can't help you there. But if you ever do find one, let me know when...
Forum: Poetry For Review 10-30-2006, 11:10 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 118
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
Well I love the poem that you just posted! I bet...

Well I love the poem that you just posted! I bet they weren't crap... aw, thanks so much! It really means a lot. I wrote this one when all of the people I thought were my friends started to kind of...
Forum: Poetry For Review 10-30-2006, 11:04 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 72
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
wow, this was really nice. I liked it a lot. I...

wow, this was really nice. I liked it a lot. I don't know what it was, but when I read it the words really, I dont know, spoke to me, I guess. That sounds cliche, but I can't quite exaplain it. Do...
Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:25 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 69
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
The Finish Line

I feel the words
crushing through my skin
inside my mind, crossing the line
trying to get through
before time is up.

Powerful emotion,
heart fills at every thought
of you, and me,
and...
Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:23 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 61
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
Move On

Losing my breath
Caught up in this ride
Iím not as safe as I thought
So hold on tight

Everythingís going
Going away.
Not sure what Iím doing.
Who needs them anyway?
Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:22 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 63
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
Untitled

Why do you waste my time?
We both know
That each second you wait
Is another one lost in space.
Why canít you see
That youíre wrong?
Itís nothing new,
You should have learned by now.
But so am I....
Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:21 PM
Replies: 2
Views: 130
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
Choices

This was my first poem, if I remember correctly... It's not my best, but I still wanted to put it up for feedback.

~~~
Donít want to be forgotten
Donít want to be alone
My greatest fear is that...
Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:20 PM
Replies: 4
Views: 118
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
I'm Gone

Iím gone, I donít belong
Stuck in the middle of a life of lies
and lost friendships.
Memories I lack
Of true bonds of true friends
Leaving me alone
To feel forgotten.
What did I do?
Was it something...
Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:17 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 67
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
In Black and White

Okay, this was originally a Harry Potter poem, but I changed a few things to make it more general. I had the same idea in my mind when I wrote it though, so the meaning didn't change.


In Black and...
Forum: Great Reads! 10-29-2006, 10:37 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 75
Posted By BeatOn_WriteOn
Dead Girls Don't Write Letters

I'm reading this book called Dead Girls Don't Write Letters by Gail Giles, and it is amazing. Has anyone else read it? I really want to discuss it, because there is so much to think about. So many...
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