Forum: Poetry For Review  11-08-2006, 06:21 PM |
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| Forum: The Reader's Lounge 11-04-2006, 01:18 PM |
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| Forum: The Writer's Lounge 11-03-2006, 07:02 PM |
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 To be quite honest, both. I love feedback,...
To be quite honest, both. I love feedback, because I really want to know what I can improve on and what's "good" or "bad". I love seeing what others think of my writing. Also, if I think I wrote...
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| Forum: Book For School 10-31-2006, 11:43 PM |
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Fahrenheit 451
I recently had to read the story Fahrenheit 451 by Ray Bradbury, and it really wasn't that bad. Actually, once I understood everything that was going on and analyzed it a bit more in class, I wanted...
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| Forum: Suggestions, Feedback & Questions 10-31-2006, 11:36 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-31-2006, 06:37 PM |
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No, you misunderstood me. I wouldn't be able to...
No, you misunderstood me. I wouldn't be able to live without similies and metaphors! What I was saying was that I just pour out what's on my mind right at first. Just all of my thoughts, everything...
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 10-30-2006, 11:28 PM |
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 10-30-2006, 11:20 PM |
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I think it sounds like a fantastic plot! I'm...
I think it sounds like a fantastic plot! I'm really interested in reading it; I don't exactly know any publishers, so I'm sorry I can't help you there. But if you ever do find one, let me know when...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-30-2006, 11:10 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-30-2006, 11:04 PM |
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wow, this was really nice. I liked it a lot. I...
wow, this was really nice. I liked it a lot. I don't know what it was, but when I read it the words really, I dont know, spoke to me, I guess. That sounds cliche, but I can't quite exaplain it. Do...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:25 PM |
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The Finish Line
I feel the words
crushing through my skin
inside my mind, crossing the line
trying to get through
before time is up.
Powerful emotion,
heart fills at every thought
of you, and me,
and...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:23 PM |
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Move On
Losing my breath
Caught up in this ride
I’m not as safe as I thought
So hold on tight
Everything’s going
Going away.
Not sure what I’m doing.
Who needs them anyway?
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:22 PM |
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Untitled
Why do you waste my time?
We both know
That each second you wait
Is another one lost in space.
Why can’t you see
That you’re wrong?
It’s nothing new,
You should have learned by now.
But so am I....
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:21 PM |
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Choices
This was my first poem, if I remember correctly... It's not my best, but I still wanted to put it up for feedback.
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Don’t want to be forgotten
Don’t want to be alone
My greatest fear is that...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:20 PM |
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I'm Gone
I’m gone, I don’t belong
Stuck in the middle of a life of lies
and lost friendships.
Memories I lack
Of true bonds of true friends
Leaving me alone
To feel forgotten.
What did I do?
Was it something...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-29-2006, 11:17 PM |
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In Black and White
Okay, this was originally a Harry Potter poem, but I changed a few things to make it more general. I had the same idea in my mind when I wrote it though, so the meaning didn't change.
In Black and...
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| Forum: Great Reads! 10-29-2006, 10:37 PM |
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Dead Girls Don't Write Letters
I'm reading this book called Dead Girls Don't Write Letters by Gail Giles, and it is amazing. Has anyone else read it? I really want to discuss it, because there is so much to think about. So many...
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