Forum: Poetry For Review  10-20-2006, 01:39 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-20-2006, 01:36 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-20-2006, 01:31 AM |
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 Sorry
I know your lifes been hard too, but I just can't seem to get out of this place. I know all my stuffs depressing, but its what I feel at the time, most of the time. I know I should be optimistic, but...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-20-2006, 01:29 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-11-2006, 09:54 PM |
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Well......The pain is both. I have this disease...
Well......The pain is both. I have this disease that could very well meancancer, I'm on a LOT of pain killers but they aren't working. Plus My Boyfriend of Five years just bolted with my best friend...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-09-2006, 05:20 PM |
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Unreachable
If I ever have something to be optimistic about then maybe I'll write about it, but I don't think thats gonna happen any time soon!
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-08-2006, 07:39 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-08-2006, 07:36 PM |
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Taking the punches
the darkness is slowly filling in around me,
and I'm tired of fighting back.
The cold is eating away at my flesh,
yet theres nowhere to run to-to stop the pain.
the tiny patch of light is...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-18-2006, 11:18 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-17-2006, 04:48 PM |
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?????????
The world is full of those who stand in wait for their lives to happen,
unable to take the initiative to make their own way.
They sit, praying that it will all come to them in time,
not seeing that...
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| Forum: Miscellanous Drafts for Feedback 09-17-2006, 04:40 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-16-2006, 06:16 PM |
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 thanks for the explaination....id have been...
thanks for the explaination....id have been completely confused otherwise. You poem is good for some reason reminds me of a childrens book, but it was pretty good for being about chickens!!
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-14-2006, 12:19 PM |
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 Not done....
we are constantly on a tedious search throughout eternity,
always struggling to be more.
Reaching out for our destinies,yet we dont know what for.
None actually know where their path leads, yet we...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-12-2006, 11:07 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-12-2006, 11:05 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-12-2006, 11:04 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-12-2006, 11:02 PM |
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 Please let it be just a poem!!!!
most of all I really hope its just a poem??????!!!!
It is good and shows amazing flow and insite, but kinda morbid.
your good but I still pray that this isnt something you are facing...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-12-2006, 04:40 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-11-2006, 09:49 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-11-2006, 09:46 PM |
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I actually have chosen to flake off the...
I actually have chosen to flake off the responsibilities!!! I am Just tired, i need a break.....ive met new friends been going out and even though im over 18 they still call and tell me when to be...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-11-2006, 04:50 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-07-2006, 05:37 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-07-2006, 05:35 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-07-2006, 05:32 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-07-2006, 05:31 PM |
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