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Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 04-16-2006, 04:49 PM
Replies: 0
Views: 179
Posted By Chicken Warrior
New Website – Teen eBooks

http://www.teenebooks.com/

Hey everyone,
I just launched this site last week. It's still fairly new, but once its fully up and running it will feature news, previews and reviews of new ebooks for...
Forum: Poetry For Review 04-16-2006, 02:01 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 157
Posted By Chicken Warrior
I'd have to read it again to understand the...

I'd have to read it again to understand the actual 'story', but I love the phrasing/rhyming. It flows really smoothly. Keep up the good work!
Forum: The Writer's Lounge 01-17-2006, 04:27 PM
Replies: 79
Views: 3,263
Posted By Chicken Warrior
I wouldn't be surprised if it were true. I...

I wouldn't be surprised if it were true.

I think it was in China that they used Jellyfish gene to make glowing Tomatos. This could be the same sort of thing, except with pigs.
Forum: The Writer's Lounge 01-12-2006, 10:47 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 485
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Yeah, I've been noticing more S and F words in...

Yeah, I've been noticing more S and F words in teen novels these days. But still no profanity relating to any religions etc. Publishers are obviously just worried about offending, and it's...
Forum: The Writer's Lounge 01-09-2006, 02:56 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 208
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Nothing a do About Much

'Much' might be an overstatement. It's not a huge deal, really, but...

In late October I applied for a telecomunicative job with a Houston-based entertainment magazine writing video game...
Forum: Poetry For Review 01-08-2006, 03:03 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 222
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Okay, I like the idea, but too many of the words...

Okay,
I like the idea, but too many of the words seem kind of forced. Try looking in a thesaurus and/or rhyming dictionary and I'm sure you could eliminate a lot of akward words/phrases.

You might...
Forum: The Writer's Lounge 01-08-2006, 02:49 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 485
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Yes, that's exactly the problem. Every second...

Yes, that's exactly the problem. Every second word a swear word IS, basically, their entire character (don't worry, they don't have a very big part anyways :p). The main character even comments on...
Forum: Poetry For Review 01-07-2006, 06:33 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 251
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Good poem :) Lots of powerful words and an...

Good poem :) Lots of powerful words and an intruiging concept.

The phrasing is a little akward in parts, though.
Forum: The Writer's Lounge 01-07-2006, 06:30 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 485
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Unhappy What to do with @#$!*# swear words?

Is it acceptible to have swear words in writing for kids/teens these days?

I'm currently writing a book (or two :p) and I've never really been worried about there beeing a lot of profanity in them,...
Forum: Poetry For Review 09-14-2005, 10:48 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 942
Posted By Chicken Warrior
I guess it just kind of makes me think of...

I guess it just kind of makes me think of falling, as in falling teardrops. BTW, Thanks for the feedback :)
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 09-09-2005, 02:41 AM
Replies: 20
Views: 1,415
Posted By Chicken Warrior
I know they make a lot of sense, but I've never...

I know they make a lot of sense, but I've never been one for busses. I'd rather ride my bike any day. As for gas prices, :blink: . I've been awaiting the day I can drive for well over a decade, but...
Forum: The Reader's Lounge 09-02-2005, 03:35 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 937
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Indeed. I just finished it today - excellent!...

Indeed. I just finished it today - excellent!

Really really good book. I'm no expert on autism but the main character is incredibly believable. What's more, the writing is very good at letting its...
Forum: Long Term Writing 09-02-2005, 03:29 AM
Replies: 13
Views: 1,270
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Being under-critical is probably better than...

Being under-critical is probably better than being over-critical :D.

I agree with some things Vanilla has said, but I think the crude writing style evident in this story actually gives it a lot of...
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-30-2005, 06:32 PM
Replies: 17
Views: 1,548
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Hmmm, very tough question. Here's a list of my...

Hmmm, very tough question. Here's a list of my favorites in no particular order:

Everything by Hayoa Miyazaki (anime director). These include My Neighbour Totoro, Spirited Away, Howl's Moving Castle...
Forum: Contests, Calls, & other Publishing Opportunities 08-30-2005, 06:18 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 564
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Great idea swissmochafudge! Actually I was...

Great idea swissmochafudge! Actually I was thinking of doing this a while back, but I never got around to it. Anyways, here's the next installment!

But though the spoilt princess didn't know it at...
Forum: Poetry For Review 08-30-2005, 05:53 PM
Replies: 7
Views: 942
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Thanks for the feedback :). I'm afriad I don't...

Thanks for the feedback :). I'm afriad I don't quite understand your question. I am sort of describing an ocean storm as an analogy for crying.

If anyone knows a better name for the poem, I'd like...
Forum: Poetry For Review 08-27-2005, 02:15 AM
Replies: 7
Views: 942
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Crying - Short Poem Draft

Here's a little poem I wrote the other night. Nothing amaizingly original or anything, but I kind of like its simplicity. Hope this formating works okay. Any feedback...
Forum: Poetry For Review 08-27-2005, 02:00 AM
Replies: 5
Views: 582
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Well done, Isis. It might make the poem run...

Well done, Isis. It might make the poem run smoother if you made it a bit longer, making the transition from the main theme of the poem to the last paragraph a bit more subtle.

It also might make...
Forum: The Reader's Lounge 08-26-2005, 05:46 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 937
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Yes, The Curious Incident of the Dog In the...

Yes, The Curious Incident of the Dog In the Nightime is a written from the point of view of a british kid with autism. Do you mean you didn't like parts of it, or there were aspects of it that you...
Forum: The Reader's Lounge 08-25-2005, 02:37 PM
Replies: 3
Views: 491
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Favorite Book Ever?

Just a little question for the sake of curiosity.

No way I'm going to answer it, though :D
Forum: The Reader's Lounge 08-25-2005, 02:33 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 937
Posted By Chicken Warrior
My favorite genre... geez, that's a tough one. I...

My favorite genre... geez, that's a tough one. I would say fantasy, but I've read a lot of really bad fantasy, no matter the era or sub-genre. Some modern fantasy just doesn't appeal to me at all...
Forum: The Reader's Lounge 08-25-2005, 02:24 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 612
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Last chance, it's still not taken!

Last chance, it's still not taken!
Forum: Announcements and News about TeenLit.com 08-24-2005, 10:57 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 697
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Thanks for the update. Very exciting! Will there...

Thanks for the update. Very exciting!

Will there be some kind of program for those who don't live in the US this time round?

- Chicken Warrior
Forum: Poetry For Review 08-24-2005, 01:13 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 626
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Poems in response to post 'Challenge'

These poems are in responce to a 'challenge' posted by Isis in another thread. This one to be exact: https://teenlit.com/forums/showthread.php?p=867



Rain, rain, rain.
Cold, pouring, rain.
Now...
Forum: The Writer's Lounge 08-24-2005, 12:23 AM
Replies: 6
Views: 874
Posted By Chicken Warrior
Nice. Some of the rhyming could be fixed up a...

Nice. Some of the rhyming could be fixed up a bit, and I agree about the radiance/radiated problem. However I don't agree about the end. You might want to add a wee bit right before the last stanza,...
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