Forum: Great Reads!  02-18-2006, 01:02 AM |
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 01-12-2006, 11:08 PM |
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 01-09-2006, 10:25 PM |
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 The Kids in the Cafe
When her mother opened the door, I noticed that Jessica was sitting alone in the living room knitting. She’d recently adopted this new hobby, and I joked with her saying “You know, my grandmother...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 01-09-2006, 07:53 PM |
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I'm sorry, but the two "firefighter"...
I'm sorry, but the two "firefighter" poems I've read both left this stenching aftertaste of mediocrity. These poems cause little if any emotional affect; rather, they're trite praise of firefighters.
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 01-07-2006, 06:38 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 01-07-2006, 06:37 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 01-07-2006, 06:37 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 01-07-2006, 04:53 PM |
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Clocks
Spinning the threads of existence,
My hands weave an afghan
Of experience, periods, and centuries.
Enslaved by a man,
Who created a circular cell
To incarcerate humanity with the fear of the...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 01-07-2006, 04:42 PM |
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I don't like it. I think the parallel structure...
I don't like it. I think the parallel structure in the last stanza ruins everything you're trying to express. The ryhming doesn't do it for me either. The ideas are fine just re-work the structure...
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| Forum: The Reader's Lounge 01-05-2006, 09:24 PM |
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 12-15-2005, 08:45 PM |
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 12-15-2005, 08:41 PM |
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 12-13-2005, 09:21 PM |
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 12-12-2005, 09:41 PM |
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Thanks for the response... Here is the rest of...
Thanks for the response... Here is the rest of the story:
The next morning I walked to the bus station. I had eighty three dollars and forty four cents. The Concord to Augusta trip was $77.42 after...
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 12-12-2005, 08:59 PM |
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Replies: 6
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Green Tea
I don't think you can understand how hard it is for me to articulate on this subject. I"'"ll give it my best, you know the 110 percent effort, but remember I"'"m sitting in a stranger"'"s room using...
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