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  1. Advice and suggestions needed
  2. I need feedback!
  3. Waiting
  4. Those Strange Morning Things
  5. Rags
  6. Erato- my poem, please give feedback!
  7. My Shakespearian Sonnet
  8. All Our Yesterdays [crit needed]
  9. A Short Poem for your Consumption
  10. Stranger(kind of wondering if this is any good)
  11. Lady in Black (a poem needing HELP)
  12. Dollar Rose for Redemption
  13. Something New, Something Blue.
  14. Poems in response to post 'Challenge'
  15. ...out of style
  16. Crying - Short Poem Draft
  17. I Hope I'm Not Feedback-Whoring...
  18. Whispers to Teddy
  19. poetry late at night
  20. feddback please poetry!
  21. seemingly oblivious
  22. The Shortest Day of the Year
  23. bored at school
  24. washable - poetry for critique
  25. The Blade
  26. Fire and Brimstone
  27. Unnamed
  28. The Renaissance Man
  29. (Lacking a name)
  30. One year anniversary/two hour choice
  31. My Tragic Poem
  32. blank
  33. A firefighter will respond
  34. One root in the desert, another in the sea
  35. Tripping on Christmas (please critique!)
  36. The Ghost In You
  37. log(365.25)
  38. The Calling
  39. I Am A Firefighter
  40. my new epoc poem
  41. Clocks
  42. Mastermind...
  43. "eden"... I Need Advice!
  44. anneversary
  45. Need an opinion...
  46. 13 Fridays
  47. Solemn and Honest
  48. Shatters in a Lie
  49. have ane oipions about my poem?
  50. for-sake art
  51. Unwilling.
  52. Blue, blue, sky.
  53. Anger's melting frosted glass.
  54. Hello, Coroner
  55. He dreamed he was a dentist
  56. Ogre are near
  57. good-bye
  58. the way i feel
  59. nightmare
  60. the hidden truth we all know
  61. The Lost One
  62. The Lost One
  63. I'll break the hourglass
  64. Hidden Haunt
  65. Chipped Mysteries
  66. no title yet
  67. I am a Child...
  68. 1984 (+ 21)
  69. hidden haunt revised version
  70. mind-scrambler
  71. The Art Of Growing Up In High School
  72. A Tale of Travesty
  73. As The Sun Falls
  74. Jordan
  75. ne ideas?
  76. spring-cleaned lungs
  77. Charlotte
  78. Stinky Fridge
  79. help
  80. Romanticism with a White Cane
  81. Stripped of Vanity
  82. advice please!!
  83. i know its stupid
  84. bare with me
  85. (plato told) And I didn't listen.
  86. coo-el thank u Isis.... i won't b able to stop now....
  87. Please oh PLEASE OH PLEAESE review this....or someof my other work, go 2 short storie
  88. gave up for you
  89. ?
  90. You're late
  91. Wishing- please review ty!
  92. Tears of smiles (AGAINST CHILD ABUSE!)
  93. A deeply concerning art - Any good???
  94. Small Town Girl
  95. Rough diamonds GO ON YOU KNOW YOU WANNA READ IT!
  96. Fingernails Aren’t The Only Thing That’s Fake
  97. Ahh, but my nails arent fake!
  98. To the people who smile when they should cry
  99. Oooh darkness!
  100. Night Light...plz critique...
  101. I'm new...be easy...
  102. work in progress
  103. killing two messangers with one stone.
  104. Untitled-any ideas???
  105. The Corruption
  106. Drifting
  107. i dunno...rea i
  108. getting things done around here
  109. coments anyone?
  110. ...? this needs improvment ---
  111. 'Mind forged manicles'-William Blake
  112. Question Y'guys...
  113. Make Him Hers---> opinions?
  114. Shows over
  115. Dedicated to swissmochafudge
  116. air on air.
  117. nonsense
  118. what do you think?
  119. What cha think?
  120. Angels
  121. Pinned against the Earth.
  122. I'm Getting Published!
  123. Maiden Chains
  124. at the end of the tunnel
  125. Chunky Baby
  126. ~a walk in my shoes~
  127. The Nuances of New Age Poetry
  128. Shaken Dove
  129. the neighborhood is empty tonight.
  130. because I'm obnoxious
  131. Light.
  132. New Poetry in a poem.
  133. The Drive
  134. Opportune
  135. Medication Becomes You
  136. 'Nother Poem :)
  137. heh, sestina..
  138. one of my favorites
  139. love limericks
  140. Reach The Sky
  141. Grand Canyon
  142. In a tub of water
  143. Bad Dream..
  144. Not sure what it is
  145. picture perfect
  146. Lost
  147. an old poem
  148. log[469]
  149. Believing
  150. Help
  151. Tales of a teenager
  152. Untitled
  153. Inspiration From a Song
  154. Seeing Things
  155. Times of sadness
  156. --
  157. Unprepared Dismay
  158. A Tribute to a Lost Friend
  159. All these lies
  160. how are you supposed to?
  161. Who knew
  162. Make the most of It
  163. wilderness funhouse
  164. Eggs&Toast for Mom&Dad
  165. A snippit
  166. Poem, state your honest comments
  167. as the footsteps
  168. needs title, your suggestions is welcome
  169. Teenagers
  170. The Talking Shell
  171. Some of my poetry...
  172. Flame
  173. Waiting
  174. Just Like That
  175. Sometime it shines, and other times it does not
  176. Real
  177. just read it
  178. Maybe Not
  179. encore, again, again
  180. No second chances
  181. view at 4.30 am
  182. Misleading
  183. Struggle of Life
  184. Struggle of life
  185. Untouchable Sleep
  186. Shear Brilliance that is Pain
  187. Our only light
  188. Sanity for sell, sold
  189. This is what life has taught me
  190. empty space.
  191. Quebec Lady in Black and Red
  192. Self-Judgement
  193. Hold True
  194. Lingering Heartbreak
  195. Sound of the Heart
  196. The Pain is Just Too Real
  197. Walk The Line
  198. Papa
  199. a route out
  200. turntimetable
  201. Math woes
  202. With Fame, We Lost It All
  203. Fears
  204. Dont think this ones done....any idea for a title?
  205. End?
  206. Razorblade
  207. Tested
  208. Not done....
  209. Pink Feather
  210. It Hurts
  211. Alone
  212. a war-torn neighbor
  213. Soup
  214. ?????????
  215. hello everyone! good morning!
  216. Black and Blue
  217. Lonely - Please Review
  218. Still in my Heart
  219. Dark Moonlight
  220. Adrenaline Rush-Honest i'm not devil
  221. Mixed Feelings - Please Review
  222. Last Time I Try
  223. log[966]
  224. Taking the punches
  225. Statue
  226. heres one of my poems tell me what you think of it
  227. fighting role models
  228. i am nothing
  229. not like my parents
  230. dreams
  231. feelin' dead
  232. For Sale Nokia N92 For A Cheap Price Of $230usd
  233. Luck Too Late
  234. So F-Ing Bored
  235. Faceless
  236. Stop sign
  237. Intelligents cast down
  238. lamb
  239. It Started
  240. In Black and White
  241. I'm Gone
  242. Choices
  243. Untitled
  244. Move On
  245. The Finish Line
  246. Its in the stars
  247. Its in the Stars
  248. setting up camp
  249. Something i came up with during cross country.
  250. Breaking Me feedback ?