Jake251
05-10-2005, 02:23 PM
Ok Here is my poem. will someone tell me if it's good?
Tomrrow
Tomorrow will hold anew set of roadblocks.
We will get though them.
With your help we can make it.
Turn the roadblocks into gifts.
These roadblocks everyone gets.
With someones help they can make it through them!
No one likes the roadblocks they get.
They need to learn to.
They can turn them into special gifts.
These gifts can be good,bad,big,or small.
The End :D
Tomrrow
Tomorrow will hold anew set of roadblocks.
We will get though them.
With your help we can make it.
Turn the roadblocks into gifts.
These roadblocks everyone gets.
With someones help they can make it through them!
No one likes the roadblocks they get.
They need to learn to.
They can turn them into special gifts.
These gifts can be good,bad,big,or small.
The End :D