View Full Version : My Shakespearian Sonnet

06-20-2005, 05:42 AM
I was bored during English while we were reading on sonnets and stuff, and I wrote one outside of my already long list of homework in that class, and well, I decided now Id show it. Its really crappy, Im better at stories and essays than poems and sonnets. but here it is, seeing the light of..well..the computer..

My health is finally dwindling
and my spirit is moving on
my soul is dry like kindling
and it is time to show my lifelong con
Ive always had deep love for you
while i hid it from the world
you grew and moved on to things true
and my secret like paper burned and curled
as i separate from this life
you do not know what is happening
and my path shall end with this knife
i can barely feel my clothes dampening
as the darkness overwhelms my eyes
i drown myself in my secrets and lies

Chicken Warrior
06-20-2005, 01:55 PM
Well done, very shakespearean and dramatic. :)