Forum: Miscellanous Drafts for Feedback  09-05-2006, 11:35 PM |
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 Hahaha funny
i like it its funny, but at some times the beat doesnt match, other wise its really funny, the people will like it
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-25-2006, 07:32 PM |
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-19-2006, 09:12 PM |
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 "will-o'-the-wisp" isnt that like a...
"will-o'-the-wisp"
isnt that like a ghost?
anyway, that was a really long list, will-o-the-wisp was like the only word i knew, the rest i didnt even know existed
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| Forum: Miscellanous Drafts for Feedback 08-19-2006, 09:03 PM |
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its hard to understand. i think you should go...
its hard to understand. i think you should go into more detail about what incubis, desciples, and templars are. at times i was confused about the incubis and their trap. also at the very end, i...
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-17-2006, 08:45 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-17-2006, 08:42 PM |
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this is good, i imagined a receptionist for a...
this is good, i imagined a receptionist for a doctor, but it could be any job. That always makes me mad when people are mean to like the waitress, or cable guy, because as your poem says "Do not be...
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-16-2006, 06:30 PM |
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| Forum: Announcements and News about TeenLit.com 08-13-2006, 02:21 PM |
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-13-2006, 02:19 PM |
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-13-2006, 02:06 PM |
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| Forum: Great Reads! 08-11-2006, 06:51 PM |
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| Forum: Great Reads! 08-11-2006, 06:36 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-11-2006, 06:34 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-11-2006, 06:31 PM |
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| Forum: The Reader's Lounge 08-09-2006, 06:03 PM |
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| Forum: The Reader's Lounge 08-08-2006, 12:59 AM |
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| Forum: Great Reads! 08-04-2006, 10:25 PM |
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| Forum: The Reader's Lounge 07-25-2006, 11:37 PM |
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| Forum: Great Reads! 07-24-2006, 02:39 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 07-24-2006, 02:31 AM |
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i like the first stanza, i know im gonna be...
i like the first stanza, i know im gonna be feeling the birthday blues next year. The poem was good, except maybe you could hint at why your dissapointed, how your family and friends let you down.
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 07-21-2006, 11:36 PM |
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hahahhaha, sorry but that was funny. random,...
hahahhaha, sorry but that was funny. random, very random. sorry bout you having been grounded, gotta watch out for them cameras, lol. i like that writing. im gonna have a grin on for a while, :)
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| Forum: The Writer's Lounge 07-21-2006, 11:30 PM |
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 07-15-2006, 12:12 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 07-13-2006, 09:03 PM |
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kindergarden first grade second grade third...
kindergarden
first grade
second grade
third grade
fourth grade
fifth grade
sixth grade
seventh grade (sevies)
eighth grade (eight ballers....sounds wrong i know, all the girls hate being called...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 07-11-2006, 06:25 PM |
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