Forum: Poetry For Review  10-13-2006, 07:18 AM |
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 I think the 'what do you think of it?' part...
I think the 'what do you think of it?' part should be in the actual poem. Makes it more unique.
I'm not going to bad bash your work for two reasons: one, I think you should keep writing and I...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-13-2006, 06:59 AM |
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There was this one kid in my class who wote an...
There was this one kid in my class who wote an article about cars. Pink cars. A whole article on what he thought of pink cars, and pink in general. He liked them(the pink cars). That wasn't cliché-...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 10-13-2006, 06:44 AM |
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| Forum: Long Term Writing 10-13-2006, 06:29 AM |
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Runnerkgirl(i think that's the right s/n or...
Runnerkgirl(i think that's the right s/n or close) got a book published I believe. In my opinion, I think you should do whatever works at that time. Me, I hate planing and it hates me. And boxes are...
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| Forum: Long Term Writing 10-13-2006, 06:17 AM |
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| Forum: The Writer's Lounge 10-13-2006, 05:53 AM |
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Dude, I haven't been on teenlit in like ages....
Dude, I haven't been on teenlit in like ages. lol, eighth grade sucks, the locker rocks...when I can get it open that is.:D
It had been two days since Simian had seen Daylight, food, or drink....
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-15-2006, 01:30 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-15-2006, 01:25 PM |
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-15-2006, 01:21 PM |
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At my school litature and English are taught in...
At my school litature and English are taught in two different classes. Grammer, in my opinion, is boring. Learning new words is cool, but I really don't care about spelling and why a preposition is...
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-13-2006, 11:44 PM |
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-13-2006, 11:40 PM |
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DUDE, you slept durring english class?? lol, So...
DUDE, you slept durring english class?? lol, So I'm not the only one *whew*. Although I mainly listened to my friends MP3 player...funny thing was I got nothing lower than a b+ in that class. lol,...
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| Forum: The Writer's Lounge 08-11-2006, 10:09 AM |
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| Forum: The Reader's Lounge 08-09-2006, 05:43 PM |
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| Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-04-2006, 11:20 PM |
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| Forum: Long Term Writing 08-04-2006, 11:11 PM |
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ohhhhhh, lol, I like it, I like it, I like it, I...
ohhhhhh, lol, I like it, I like it, I like it, I like it!
favorite part "No torrential rain crushed window-box flowers; no lightning streaked across the sky in spidery filaments. Instead,...
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| Forum: The Writer's Lounge 08-03-2006, 08:29 AM |
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| Forum: Long Term Writing 07-29-2006, 12:21 PM |
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Ok, first what you want to do is start a new...
Ok, first what you want to do is start a new paragraph every time someone is speaking, and use spell-check. Lol, I speak from experience, it helps a lot:bigsmile: . The story itself reminds me of a...
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| Forum: The Writer's Lounge 07-28-2006, 06:15 AM |
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 Something good from chain emails
I got this from a friend. You know the kind of emails that you're supposed to foward, lol, the kind of emails that your parents call junk mail. I call it random mail, because every once in a while...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 07-26-2006, 01:12 PM |
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| Forum: Announcements and News about TeenLit.com 07-24-2006, 09:09 PM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 07-23-2006, 07:57 AM |
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 07-22-2006, 05:15 PM |
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Who knew
Ok, so I need some crit on these. I'm thinking about using one of them for a story...not sure which though...hope you like!
Blessed are those few souls
Close your eyes, close your eyes
And you won’t...
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| Forum: The Writer's Lounge 07-22-2006, 05:00 PM |
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| Forum: Great Reads! 07-21-2006, 11:08 PM |
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Good end-of-summer reads
Couple books I thought were pretty good:
Chill wind, By: Janet Mcdonald
With her welfare benefits running out and no help from her children's father, 19-year-old Aisha is forced to examine her...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 07-21-2006, 10:32 PM |
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