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Forum: Poetry For Review 11-07-2006, 05:42 PM
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Posted By gymchik104
Post Breaking Me feedback ?

Feedback and constructive criticism would be nice =)


Breaking Me

How do you confess your love to someone you can never have?
How do you pour your soul into a heart that can never be yours?
If...
Forum: Long Term Writing 11-07-2006, 04:59 PM
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Posted By gymchik104
Lightbulb Would like constructive criticism on prologue to untitled book

Prologue

Hurry! Turn off the lights! a girl chirps excitedly over whispers and random bursts of laughter. The candles are lit and I run to flick off the light switch. I sit back down in a...
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