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 11-07-2006, 05:42 PM
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TeenLit Newbie
Join Date: Nov 2006
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 Breaking Me feedback ?
Feedback and constructive criticism would be nice =) Breaking Me How do you confess your love to someone you can never have? How do you pour your soul into a heart that can never be yours? If loving to the point of obsession is lethal than I have been maimed If wanting you is treason then I have betrayed I'm falling for you , and all resistance leads back to you Kill me slowly Your heart will always be out of my grasp You know what I seek, but it is yours to give You know how I feel yet you turn away , and its breaking me inside. |
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