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Old 08-14-2006, 04:29 AM   #1
Silent suits the solitude
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Unhappy Heh.. if you can't tell.. im a hopeless romantic

"Never give up on someone you can't go a day without thinking about"
~ A Letter of the Heart ~
By : A. Cleveland

An old man whispers sayings to live life by... a younger man overhears..

Old man claims- "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take...
but by the moments that take our breath away..."

younger man whispers- "Kat, you leave me breathless.."

Old man states- "Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter."

younger man cries- "Kat, I won't be quiet about, how I feel about you"

Old man remarks- "Risks must be taken, because the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing"

younger man smiles- "Kat, You're going to be my risk."

Old man says- "Never give up on someone you can't go a day without thinking about"

Younger man promises- "I won't"

younger man (me) says- "Im not the brightest light around.. but im
constant, and can
promise that I will never burn out when sought.
I will never be covered by misguiding fog, and
I will never be copied by another..
simply put, I'm yours"

the younger man smiles with finality. Nervous, he reaches a shaking hand toward the old man, and brushes glass. The mirror holds only an image of a younger man with sad eyes, full of hope, now...
and a silent voice
carried with the wind warns..

Old man (me)- "Never give up on someone you can't go a day without thinking about"
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