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Old 04-16-2006, 01:26 PM   #1
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I hear music in the background,
The soft tones of my heritage,
In an ancient mahogany body,
That lulls me down that road,
Of sweet mellodies,
Sour on my tongue and sweet to my heart,
Dulset tones,
Of the organ,
Musical strands of being,
Twisted into me,
A personality of guitar stings,
Strummed and picked in the right way,
I'll be music to your ears,
Or i'll be bitter sour,
And twang to your misfortune,
The Beatles rocked my cradle,
The Supremes laughed with me,
And the guitar was my life line,
Fantastically annoying,
Yet i could never give it up,
Because these tones make me me,
And strum me the right way...
I'm like an atom,
So small you can not see me,
Try and split me,
And i'm not so little anymore...
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