TeenLit Community Forums  

If this is your first visit, be sure to check out the FAQ by clicking the link above. You may have to register before you can post: click the register link above to proceed. To start viewing messages, select the forum that you want to visit from the selection below.

Go Back   TeenLit Community Forums > Writing > Poetry For Review
User Name
Register FAQ Guidelines Members List Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 04-09-2006, 07:48 AM   #1
TeenLit Regular
girlonfire's Avatar
Join Date: Apr 2006
Posts: 72
Talking You're late

Well i'm always late',
'You shouldn't be',
'Who gives a fcuk?'
'You should Lydia,
You should',
"You see i know i should,
I should,
I really should,
I should care,
I should push and push my self until i fit,
Jack sht,
You wish,
You see me and dad were singing 'till two am,
He was playing his harmonica and guitar,
And just a little piano,
Added spice,
Of an organ in the back ground,
And there was me,
Yowling in the micro-phone,
Belting it so loud,
I couldn't hear the cries and shouts,
The gun shots i feel,
In my mind,
Piercing the bodies of noble citizens,
And i feel it in my mind,
But i sing so loud i can't feel,
Can't hear and i pretend it isn't real,
'scuse the language,
It's just you people make me so darn mad,
I have to fit,
Have to fit in your jack sht,
If i want to make it,
In your perfect world,
Only i can hear and i can feel,
I need an epidural,
Just to get my hand to the paper,
And my joints,
Sandpaper on my muscles,
It hurts,
I have to play along,
Help them on their quest,
To leave all that pain,
Help them to forget about it,
If i want to make my stand,
And blast them suckers down,
Because as i write a long awaited answer,
(for this crappy test)
I hear them screaming,
Feel the gun shot wounds
And an orgasm that's far from pleasure,
It a sick game,
And i 'm not fitting in your jack sht",
'You're still late Lydia'
I take the slip and go,
girlonfire is offline   Reply With Quote

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump

All times are GMT -4. The time now is 01:37 PM.

Powered by vBulletin Version 3.5.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2006, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

EMS Chat
EMS News