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03-23-2006, 10:01 PM | #1 |
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Stinky Fridge
I wrote this several years ago but I really like it.
Stinky Fridge Moldy popcorn, rotten eggs, Little bits of chicken legs, Week old pizza, month old beans, Year old chicken-ala-king, Pumpkin pie from last Thanksgiving, Sour milk… Is that thing living? Up on top, melted ice cream, Candy from last Halloween, Don’t forget the mystery meat With freezer burns that can’t be beat, Chinese food and soda pop, All with fuzzy mold on top, Black and slimy banana peals, I can’t believe these were once meals. Deviled eggs from old Ma Midge, Will someone please clean out that fridge? ~ In tribute to a very smelly fridge at my school. Hope you like it! |
03-24-2006, 07:19 AM | #2 |
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lol, school lunch sucks. truly, it's a form of drugs. but lol, awesome poem. funny and cute.
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03-25-2006, 11:03 PM | #3 |
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reminds me of a poem where this kid is saying how sick he is and cant go to school
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03-27-2006, 06:00 PM | #4 |
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I love your poem. It made me smile and its cute. My old school had nasty lunches, thier okay at my new school.
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03-27-2006, 10:08 PM | #5 |
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it's not actually about school lunches just a particuler fridge at my old school
i was taking a creative writing summer course and there was a fridge in the room that nobody had cleaned out when the year ended so it stunk really bad |
03-28-2006, 01:04 PM | #6 |
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lol, that was good! i liked it.
just, u misspelled peals. it should be peels. but otherwise, it was vair good and tres amusing.
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