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Old 10-25-2007, 01:41 AM   #1
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Default spring equinox

spring equinox

off the fragile
branches, the
green residue sunders
and drops onto the
ground; it falls in slabs,
hitting the sweaty
grains once dead.

i peel the extraneous
muck with my gloves,
until the vines are naked;
bathed of the crusty
caterpillars, raisinlike
larvae, and liquid metals.


yeah, 100th post!

youíre going to use
the transitive relation
and see why.

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