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Old 09-25-2006, 02:10 PM   #2
Inwe Ringil
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This is a beautiful poem. But you do have some spelling mistakes. Such as shoulder and jewel and happened. Trust me I understand this, me, I'm the Typo Queen. *laugh*
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