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Old 09-20-2006, 06:43 PM   #9
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Bulletboy-3rd august 2006
Friday-3rd august 06:27 (the exact time I wake up every morning in a cold sweat)

For what it’s worth, I did save you. Over and over again each time id be faster stronger quicker smoother. And then id wake up .I played it over in my head so many times changing simple things id overlooked before. But every morning I wake in a cold sweat arms empty and heart still broken beyond repair. Have you ever wished so hard for something that you loose faith in wishing?

I guess it’s about the time you saw the finished product when its published tomorrow I become more and less of a liar than I ever have been. Now our love is timeless now no one can take it away now it’s in ink now it’s final.
its been checked and checked again but every time they say ill see you tomorrow I want to tell them they have over looked something or ask them if they’ve even read it.

This may only be a line in a song and I know im no curt cobain
Its only four cords and a chorus but I hope it won’t be in vain
I could be your Romeo if you’d only let me try
And you could be my Juliet but I won’t let you die
I don’t have much to offer just this simple song
And my love that I assure you is guaranteed life long
I’m just a broken heart from a broken home
Just a broken heart that’s scared to be alone
But I could be your Romeo if you’d only let me try
And you could be my Juliet but I won’t let you die

I loved you unconditionally my little broken heart
But with your lack of confidence we were ripped apart
Why are you defeated when the battles just begun?
Take it on shoulder and learn to carry on
21st century Shakespeare “to be or not to be”?
It’s true you were my Romeo and guess where that leaves me
Cold and just as promised dieing for my cause
It’s my final show, my matinee, minus the applause

This world is cruel and cold and true to Shakespeare’s plays
There's only one real question in all your living days
To be or not to be to be without real cause
It’s my final show my matinee minus the applause
Love is dead and buried and so is common sense
Whoever killed cupid it was purely self defence
The little bastard’s arrows were croaked they were tipped
Angel don’t you see have you not read the script
Romeos the first to die and then its Juliet
Or did you think you were saving me from this bitter sweet duet
My little black heart is splintered and has a broken beat
It simply can’t go on feeling incomplete
You didn’t die in vain my darling you live on
Immortalised in these words your spirit carries on
It doesn’t really compensate for all that you went through
But ill be with you very soon cos tonight is my debut
I could be your Romeo if you'd only let me try
You could be and be my Juliet and we all know the last bit was a lie

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