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 08-07-2006, 09:38 PM
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TeenLit Newbie
Join Date: Jul 2006
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*Jumps at Phantom wielding a spear!*
I like this too...but I wish it was a little more flushed out...it is very deep...and has a lot of potential to be great...so I would look at it in a few weeks...in a different way..and expose it some more... *DON"T SPEAR ME!!*
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