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 03-26-2005, 05:24 AM
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Well, i think it was...great. lol. me thinks its a wonderful poem, but i am poetically challenged as i cant write and i must read it a few time to fully grasp somethin. ^_^; but i like it, its got good consepts to it. Keep goin ash!!
[dont mind my bad english and grammar, im a little tired at the mo.] |
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03-26-2005, 06:04 AM
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 thanks
Thanks honey, I suppose it is a little confusing
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04-01-2005, 02:44 AM
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Very pretty!
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04-27-2005, 05:13 PM
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Well done. I'm impressed, and you'd be surprised at how hard it is to do that.
It's very interesting that you've done a kind of double personality about it. A witness to your own experience. Will we be seeing more? maybe not of the same poem, but other works? |
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05-10-2005, 05:32 PM
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 Great poem:-)
Ash,
Your poem is awsome!  __________________
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05-11-2005, 01:36 PM
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Its not hard to write a poem zachara!:-)
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12-07-2005, 03:43 PM
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just wondering, is "I" the dreamer of your personality, the one who overlooks things and wants to pursue things, and always gives the dream, but is pushed back by reality?
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01-08-2006, 08:06 PM
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 wow
Wow.... well that was a super good pimped out poem!!!!!! especially how like 2 ppl were the same person but .. yea! i had to read it 3 times to fully get it but now ... wow.... i wish i could think of a poem like that! the only 2 poems ive posted here in teen lit like suck
 ... Mastermind and Eden.Ur lucky to be able to write like that. keep it up. Good luck.
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