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 06-20-2005, 04:42 AM
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 My Shakespearian Sonnet
I was bored during English while we were reading on sonnets and stuff, and I wrote one outside of my already long list of homework in that class, and well, I decided now Id show it. Its really crappy, Im better at stories and essays than poems and sonnets. but here it is, seeing the light of..well..the computer..
My health is finally dwindling and my spirit is moving on my soul is dry like kindling and it is time to show my lifelong con Ive always had deep love for you while i hid it from the world you grew and moved on to things true and my secret like paper burned and curled as i separate from this life you do not know what is happening and my path shall end with this knife i can barely feel my clothes dampening as the darkness overwhelms my eyes i drown myself in my secrets and lies
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06-20-2005, 12:55 PM
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Well done, very shakespearean and dramatic.
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