nashville's singing to me

Ameerah8 · 04-13-2006, 09:37 AM

cool, i like it. lol, did you actually go to this concert? it sounds fun.

thisismenotyou · 04-13-2006, 10:57 AM

yea i did it was realy fun!!! there were 3 bands and a ton of people!!!! it was awesome!!
Ryanne

herrshuster · 05-08-2006, 12:13 PM

well if you want review, i think it's ok, but the writing is bland. "it was", "there were", etc. Try and spice up the language a bit.

04-13-2006, 09:37 AM	#1
Ameerah8 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 214	cool, i like it. lol, did you actually go to this concert? it sounds fun. __________________ Birds of a feather flock together, And so will pigs and swine; Rats and mice can have their choice And so will I have mine.

04-13-2006, 10:57 AM	#2
thisismenotyou TeenLit Regular Join Date: Sep 2005 Posts: 42	yea i did it was realy fun!!! there were 3 bands and a ton of people!!!! it was awesome!! Ryanne __________________ Ashley: i'm sry for the come here-go away trip i've been putting you through Spencer: ok...whay would you do that? Ashley: because i want you...and i don't wanna hurt you Spencer: i can take care of myself...and with some left to take care of you

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05-08-2006, 12:13 PM	#3
herrshuster TeenLit Newbie Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 25	well if you want review, i think it's ok, but the writing is bland. "it was", "there were", etc. Try and spice up the language a bit.