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Old 04-11-2006, 03:54 PM   #1
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Red face Rough diamonds GO ON YOU KNOW YOU WANNA READ IT!

What is with you?
All sounding like William Blake,
Miniture Shakespears,
Annoying reicarnates,
All these little,
Official looking poems,
All spread out neat,
With sectioned little paragraphs,
You wanna make me spew,
I wanna be a revelation!
To this art,
I just can't bother my self,
With these...mmm,
Fancy little phrases,
What do they mean?
'Cause babes we aint no Einstien,
What they want is someone real,
A lil' ghetto street edge,
A lil' scruff in the morning,
'Cause we're all just rough diamonds,
Try'na out shine each other,
Stereo typing our own art of writing,
It isn't cool,
Poetry can only be judged,
Not by...,
How many flaws it has,
But where it came from,
Your heart or head?
I know which one i'm concerned with,
I'm like an atom,
So small you can not see me,
Try and split me,
And i'm not so little anymore...
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Old 04-12-2006, 12:41 PM   #2
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god i luv ur poems
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What would you attempt if you knew you could not fail.

Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare.
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