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05-26-2005, 05:58 AM | #1 |
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My Love Poem
MissyI Love You
Love can be soft at the touch, Or like a razor in your hand. I want to say I love you, very much, But would you understand? I love you, can't you see? The tears of joy in my eyes, the song in my voice, You mean the world to me, Its not like I had a choice. If I did have a choice, to whom I may love, I would be you! Kinder, and Sweeter than a Dove, Understanding, Passionet, and moreover, The kind of guy, who knows when to take over. Beggars can't be chosers, Or so the saying goes, Someday, you may love me back, dear lover, But who would ever know? All I know, is right here, right now, So kiss me, my lover, With your lips above my brow, And I shall be able to tell, If I go to heaen, Or if I go to hell. You love me, dear lover! I know you do! I felt the passion on your lips, I knew it! I swear I knew! Now place your hands upon my hips, And kiss me your sweet sin, I know I'll remember it always, until we meet again. ******So what do you think? I love it, but I wrote it...so let your voie ring out above the croud, and make a differance...erm...in my life! lol! But please, read it, rate it, and leave a essage, I'll get back to you as soon as I can...BEEP! LMAO! XOXO
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Wow this was amazing! Beautifull! Poignant! I could go on forever! This is truly an amzing poem... ~Mocha~ |
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05-26-2005, 03:30 PM | #3 |
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Thank you! What happened was that I was online looking up poems for my friends when I ran out of poems I liked, so I wrote one, and just to see if it was any good, I didn't tell them I wrote it... and my friend Clarissa who had just got out of a relationship, was crying. lol... but yes, thank you!!
XOXO Missy
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05-27-2005, 04:55 AM | #4 |
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Lalalala
this is a fun website... when pple are on that is!
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05-29-2005, 07:32 AM | #5 | |
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That is how it was supposed to look!
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