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Old 03-23-2006, 10:01 PM   #1
Cierra
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Talking Stinky Fridge

I wrote this several years ago but I really like it.

Stinky Fridge

Moldy popcorn, rotten eggs,
Little bits of chicken legs,
Week old pizza, month old beans,
Year old chicken-ala-king,
Pumpkin pie from last Thanksgiving,
Sour milkÖ Is that thing living?
Up on top, melted ice cream,
Candy from last Halloween,
Donít forget the mystery meat
With freezer burns that canít be beat,
Chinese food and soda pop,
All with fuzzy mold on top,
Black and slimy banana peals,
I canít believe these were once meals.
Deviled eggs from old Ma Midge,
Will someone please clean out that fridge?

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In tribute to a very smelly fridge at my school. Hope you like it!
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Old 03-24-2006, 07:19 AM   #2
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lol, school lunch sucks. truly, it's a form of drugs. but lol, awesome poem. funny and cute.
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reminds me of a poem where this kid is saying how sick he is and cant go to school
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Old 03-27-2006, 06:00 PM   #4
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I love your poem. It made me smile and its cute. My old school had nasty lunches, thier okay at my new school.
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Old 03-27-2006, 10:08 PM   #5
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it's not actually about school lunches just a particuler fridge at my old school
i was taking a creative writing summer course and there was a fridge in the room that nobody had cleaned out when the year ended so it stunk really bad
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Old 03-28-2006, 01:04 PM   #6
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lol, that was good! i liked it.
just, u misspelled peals. it should be peels.
but otherwise, it was vair good and tres amusing.
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