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03-14-2006, 06:42 PM | #1 |
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ne ideas?
does any one have any ideas for a name for this poem that i wrote and ways that i could make it better
Finding a way Into the fray Into the swords Of the horde Clashing and swinging For a meaning Known only To the lonely Who cant find The state of mind Where they will care For another’s fare Now that I’m out Ill try prevent another’s pout To keep the fray From stealing the world away |
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