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 02-23-2006, 05:59 PM
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Great poem! I really loved it - it was really simple and to the point, which can be a stronger statement than anything else. I agree with JEM for the last line, though. Saying it out loud, the other three lines seem to follow the trochee pattern, but the last line is just barely off. It's really good, though. Jules |
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