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Old 12-08-2005, 09:19 PM   #1
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OK... wow, I didn't expect that.

Uhh, wow, you guys are good.
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Old 12-12-2005, 11:34 PM   #2
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Uh, WHOA guys, you just entirely blew me away. All I have to say is that damnit, I agree! haha but yeah, wow, amazing job with the critque there, entirely honest and entirely helpful. Said everything I had in mind.

Dear, I understand these are your raw feelings, but like Unwilling said, your raw feelings don't matter unless they incite beauty in my mind. Some of the lines in your poem are tres belle, and they're on the cusp of showing me what's happening, you're almost there, a little more work and it's going to happen, Promise!
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Old 01-07-2006, 10:59 PM   #3
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Alrite.. well idk wut yall thought but i loved the poem! i signed up to teen lit cuz it said "teen" but ur poem sounds much more than a poem written by a teen. Idk how old u are or how old neone is here. but for me, i love the poem! way to go.

ps: guys please check out my poem "Mastermind" I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WUT PPL THINK OF IT!!!
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