I didn't know each story needed a well-defined tone, and that's kind of what the story is. It's just a little tid-bit of my life. It is kind of pointless, I guess. But I can't make the character seem more likable and easy to relate to, she's me. haha, but maybe I didn't accurately portray her. I'll give it a second glance and re-write.
Thanks for the comments.
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