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Old 03-14-2006, 06:42 PM   #1
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does any one have any ideas for a name for this poem that i wrote and ways that i could make it better

Finding a way
Into the fray
Into the swords
Of the horde
Clashing and swinging
For a meaning
Known only
To the lonely
Who cant find
The state of mind
Where they will care
For anotherís fare
Now that Iím out
Ill try prevent anotherís pout
To keep the fray
From stealing the world away
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