Forum: Poetry For Review 10-14-2006, 08:30 AM |
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Forum: Poetry For Review 10-02-2006, 05:18 PM |
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I’ve viewed past the craggy
labyrinth of smog and gookiness
through my night-coloured
cross-hairs.
I see people. these people are
moribund and snake-skinned.
I can feel every airborne pox...
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Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-14-2006, 10:36 AM |
Replies: 9
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i hope you're not sleeping during a literature...
i hope you're not sleeping during a literature class, rather than a grammar class. I mean, the ultimate sign of a jerk is someone not reading or paying attention to a writer and yet, this ignorer...
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Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 08-14-2006, 10:33 AM |
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Forum: The Reader's Lounge 08-09-2006, 09:24 PM |
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why, it's about this magical town called...
why, it's about this magical town called chewandshallow--but it's not your average town--the weather is food. it rains orange juice, toast falls from the sky, etc. However, the weather begins to take...
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Forum: Poetry For Review 08-09-2006, 12:15 PM |
Replies: 5
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yeah. it is pretty short. *shoots...
yeah. it is pretty short.
*shoots Girlonfire*
but seriously, do you think 'password to my sins' is a good line? I admire the fact that you used password, but the ending is slightly the usual....
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Forum: The Reader's Lounge 08-09-2006, 12:56 AM |
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Forum: The Writer's Lounge 08-03-2006, 12:56 AM |
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Forum: The Reader's Lounge 08-03-2006, 12:55 AM |
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Views: 71
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Forum: Long Term Writing 07-20-2006, 09:39 PM |
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Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 07-09-2006, 09:01 PM |
Replies: 11
Views: 244
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Forum: Poetry For Review 06-30-2006, 02:16 PM |
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Forum: Short Stories For Review 06-28-2006, 02:35 PM |
Replies: 7
Views: 266
I found your story nice. You know, in the...
I found your story nice.
You know, in the time to process that much writing, and hit the reply button, be sure it was posted, I'm sure that friend would've surely hung up by then. That's the only...
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Forum: Poetry For Review 06-28-2006, 01:30 PM |
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Forum: Poetry For Review 06-26-2006, 01:20 AM |
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the only disclaimer I wish to have is that I'm trying to focus on a unique style of writing in my poetry--so if there's something that you spot directly, or something that's noticable, or if it's too...
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Forum: Short Stories For Review 06-21-2006, 11:41 AM |
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Views: 465
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Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 06-16-2006, 12:24 PM |
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Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 06-16-2006, 11:53 AM |
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Forum: Poetry For Review 06-16-2006, 11:47 AM |
Replies: 22
Views: 426
The poem's more of a rant, and does have some...
The poem's more of a rant, and does have some examples of offense. However, if I were from 30 years into the future, and this is the first poem I saw, I'd wonder what type of poetry is she attacking....
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Forum: Poetry For Review 06-16-2006, 11:45 AM |
Replies: 21
Views: 505
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Forum: The Reader's Lounge 06-15-2006, 11:09 PM |
Replies: 58
Views: 2,448
Oh yes. The edition I had was pre-9/11. There...
Oh yes. The edition I had was pre-9/11.
There are some times when the words though create interesting syntax and metaphors. I raised my eyebrow more than a few times throughout the year not just...
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Forum: The Reader's Lounge 06-15-2006, 10:51 PM |
Replies: 58
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Forum: The Reader's Lounge 06-15-2006, 01:00 PM |
Replies: 58
Views: 2,448
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Forum: Poetry For Review 06-14-2006, 02:42 PM |
Replies: 22
Views: 426
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Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 06-14-2006, 01:09 PM |
Replies: 25
Views: 611
Yeah. Yeah. Got lots of reading to do. I have...
Yeah. Yeah. Got lots of reading to do. I have some summer reading for English next year.
Lots of writing I want done as well.
I'm right now trying to learn some Latin, and I have been signed up...
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