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Forum: The Reader's Lounge 08-04-2006, 12:23 AM
Replies: 2
Views: 78
Posted By Vennila X Vana
I don't have any guesses but I sure as hell hope...

I don't have any guesses but I sure as hell hope it's Sirius. I always wanted more of him.
Forum: Great Reads! 08-04-2006, 12:22 AM
Replies: 3
Views: 110
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Bruce Coville was my favourite author when I was...

Bruce Coville was my favourite author when I was a kid, I read almost everything he's written. I ought to re-read those.
Forum: Great Reads! 08-04-2006, 12:20 AM
Replies: 19
Views: 319
Posted By Vennila X Vana
I have read everything that Pullman has written,...

I have read everything that Pullman has written, pretty much. There is no author I love more than him and no books I love more than that trilogy. It kind of makes me sad when other people love them...
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 06-26-2006, 12:20 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 236
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Hey, nice to meet the both of you. I'm Vennila,...

Hey, nice to meet the both of you. I'm Vennila, be on the lookout for my sharp critiques--I mean tough love.

Don't worry about not posting in the sticky, this introductory post sets you apart...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-22-2006, 10:16 PM
Replies: 5
Views: 107
Posted By Vennila X Vana
It's a very cute little poem. It's not my taste...

It's a very cute little poem. It's not my taste because it's not of a dire subject ;) I am a very dire person.

I have to say though, everything about this poem is solid. Imagery, punctuation,...
Forum: Great Reads! 06-19-2006, 03:53 PM
Replies: 23
Views: 1,382
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Yes, and they would be wrong. The classics are...

Yes, and they would be wrong.

The classics are classics for a reason. They introduced a new style of writing or genre of fiction.

But you are right, Harry Potter was not my kind of book so I am...
Forum: Long Term Writing 06-18-2006, 12:52 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 389
Posted By Vennila X Vana
You're welcome! Please do keep us posted, I like...

You're welcome!

Please do keep us posted, I like a good "paperback-fantasy" every now and then. And you're a pretty good writer too, okay?
Forum: Long Term Writing 06-18-2006, 12:49 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 389
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Frankly I think this is a good place to start...

Frankly I think this is a good place to start it.



I think you should keep the dialogue from there and work in all that preceding information you gave us, as it is needed.

It will take a massive...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-18-2006, 12:45 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 174
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Yeah, I think the title should be something more...

Yeah, I think the title should be something more concise and sweet, like the poem.

Well I just think you have way too many commas. Let me think.
Life is like a Hersey's bar--you want to gobble it up...
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 06-18-2006, 12:40 AM
Replies: 25
Views: 611
Posted By Vennila X Vana
What summer reading do you guys have for school?...

What summer reading do you guys have for school? I am going into my Junior year of Honors English so of course I've got the Scarlet Letter. I read it for a book report in my freshmen year so...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-18-2006, 12:32 AM
Replies: 4
Views: 179
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Medication Becomes You

So this is the first thing I've written in a while. The first thing that wasn't an angsty vent in poem style that is. Although this is pretty angsty too. haha just going through some tough, teenage...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-18-2006, 12:28 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 174
Posted By Vennila X Vana
The chocolate one is not so bad! I mean yes, the...

The chocolate one is not so bad! I mean yes, the idea is a little overdone, but completely relateable. It's not new, but it makes up for it in style.

You've got Vennila approval on it.

I do have...
Forum: Long Term Writing 06-18-2006, 12:24 AM
Replies: 15
Views: 389
Posted By Vennila X Vana
First a few grammar mistakes, spelling errors and...

First a few grammar mistakes, spelling errors and nitpicky things.



Ouch run-on sentence! Try "The girls did not return home, though they were allowed to visit their families. In the palace though...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-18-2006, 12:07 AM
Replies: 9
Views: 174
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Nooo! I liked you, now I'm afraid the rotten...

Nooo! I liked you, now I'm afraid the rotten fruit will kill you.

I'm going to be honest, other than you having written it there wasn't too much else I liked about this poem.

A poem consisting only...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-17-2006, 07:54 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 426
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Okay as I explained before. They use these big...

Okay as I explained before.

They use these big words that muck up their poems because they don't think that they have to make sense. So the line is the pretty words and images are lost among...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-17-2006, 07:52 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 364
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Oh that line! "It's a poem it's not supposed...

Oh that line! "It's a poem it's not supposed to make sense." Poetry is not a travesty of words its an enhancement!

Fine, use that metaphor if you like. I see now, I just never thought of it that way...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-17-2006, 07:50 PM
Replies: 13
Views: 329
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Random, but what's your signature from?

Random, but what's your signature from?
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-17-2006, 03:45 PM
Replies: 21
Views: 505
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Okay sorry but it's spelled per se, it's just...

Okay sorry but it's spelled per se, it's just pronounced per say.

And to not make this post seem hateful and pointless, congratulations. You want to tell us how it happened? I am interested.
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-17-2006, 03:43 PM
Replies: 15
Views: 364
Posted By Vennila X Vana
I write snippets like this all the time. They're...

I write snippets like this all the time. They're fun aren't they?

I don't like "with every kiss you made and broke" because kisses can't be broken literally and I don't see how figuratively. I am...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-17-2006, 03:40 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 426
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Unwilling: Thanks for the suggestion. It's not my...

Unwilling:
Thanks for the suggestion. It's not my bag because I'm really okay with the title, but thanks anyways you know? No harm done.
Lohark:
Wow, thanks for the kind words.
GirlonFire:
I do not...
Forum: The Writer's Lounge 06-15-2006, 08:43 PM
Replies: 1
Views: 241
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Of A Different Sort.

I was looking at the Add-On-Story and I had to say that type of genre is not my bag, fantasy, sci-fi? I was wondering if anybody would be interested in starting another one? Just to add variety? I've...
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 06-15-2006, 08:41 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 373
Posted By Vennila X Vana
I had the same problem! There's tons of them and...

I had the same problem! There's tons of them and they don't really stick around, I kept confusing them all.

Yeah I think I read just the first chapter and I had to get back to my work. I'm thinking...
Forum: Poetry For Review 06-15-2006, 08:37 PM
Replies: 22
Views: 426
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Oh, no worries. I have tough skin. The critiques...

Oh, no worries. I have tough skin. The critiques weren't hard at all, everyone had killer suggestions.

Wow, that is really nice of you! You're welcome. I love reading your poetry and I hope you guys...
Forum: The TeenLit Lounge 06-15-2006, 12:27 PM
Replies: 11
Views: 373
Posted By Vennila X Vana
I started to read On the Road and I really liked...

I started to read On the Road and I really liked it. My English teacher is in love with the guy, so one day I just sat at his desk and read the book all period. I liked it. What do you think so far?
Forum: The Reader's Lounge 06-15-2006, 12:24 PM
Replies: 58
Views: 2,448
Posted By Vennila X Vana
Wrong Indians. I mean as in people from India. I...

Wrong Indians. I mean as in people from India.

I think you're alluding to a Native American joke?
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