Forum: Short Stories For Review  09-07-2006, 12:14 AM |
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 09-03-2006, 04:39 PM |
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 ok, i REALLY liked this, and normally im not a...
ok, i REALLY liked this, and normally im not a big action type of person, so thats alot coming from me. =P
But I had one problem, which is it starts out with four people. then the girl and leader go...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-02-2006, 10:17 PM |
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I REALLY like the ending. That's a really...I...
I REALLY like the ending. That's a really...I want to say powerful but i dont think thats the right word. maybe its really bare? yeah, its a very bare poem in the means that it's showing something...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-02-2006, 05:32 PM |
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 Walk The Line
This is going to sound really stupid, but this was kind of inspired as a fan fic for buffy the vampire slayer. I know it's kind of a weird idea, but you know what they say, if the ends justify the...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 09-02-2006, 02:45 AM |
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 09-01-2006, 02:40 PM |
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| Forum: Short Stories For Review 08-31-2006, 11:44 PM |
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Words Without Meaning
Let me know what you guys think. I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this in retro-spect.
Words Without Meaning
He told her he loved her. She believed him. It had to be true. He sent her love...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-31-2006, 11:16 PM |
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Sound of the Heart
Sound of the Heart
I listened to his heart
As it beat within its cage
It sounded slow and heavy
The sound of a sorrowed heart
His heart had felt pain
And the strain of many tired days
It sounded...
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| Forum: Poetry For Review 08-31-2006, 11:08 PM |
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