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 05-03-2006, 08:55 AM
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Join Date: Feb 2006
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 ...? this needs improvment ---
not exactly sure what iwas getting at here... just had a feeling and tried to write it.. dunno if it worked as i meant it to but.. hmm wht do you thnk?
Who would’ve known, This unwanted love This unheard voice... A prayer whispered without truth Without beleiving. A breath of innocence Tainted with the drug That swirled her into oblivion That night. A kiss beneath the heavens The golden warmth Of an untouched heart Rising from the good cheer And heartiness of the season A small bird lands in the ashes Of herself. Wild noises Crowds of wax dolls Reaching out to grab her Strangness and likeness Good and better Confusion.. Bewilderness Sends her into a complete spiral of misundestanding - Who would’ve known... |
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