what do you think?

[RaMiE]

please tell me what you think.

The lipstick, jewelry, cage her –
False yet desperate –
Dancing across the empty room
A stage of distortion.
The candles become dimmer…
He sits in the corner,
in that chair he loved so much
Coat in hand, shaking his head.
Her dress is torn, matted hair sticks to her bloody face
an incomplete smile is born out of nervousness
but dies away quickly…
She stands across from him
in desperation of reassurance
an orchestra is making beautiful music downstairs
but this scene is not beautiful anymore
her heart is screaming
as he stands and moves towards the door
now her mouth is screaming,
she begs for him to turn around
her terror stricken eyes… tears –
streaming down her face, a mangled wreck –
lined with bleakness and despair
most of the candles have burnt out
they both come to the door, as he reaches out for the handle
he looks down at her face… in the very last of the light,
her soul is exposed for him to see
his expression suddenly turns form anger –
to understanding…
She falls into his arms in exhaustion
he slumps down onto the cold hard ground and holds her.
The darkness now binds them both
But what they have within each other –
Will never come undone…