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Old 05-26-2005, 05:59 AM   #1
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Cool My Love Poem

I Love You

Love can be soft at the touch,
Or like a razor in your hand.
I want to say I love you, very much,
But would you understand?

I love you, can't you see?
The tears of joy in my eyes, the song in my voice,
You mean the world to me,
Its not like I had a choice.

If I did have a choice, to whom I may love,
I would be you! Kinder, and Sweeter than a Dove,
Understanding, Passionet, and moreover,
The kind of guy, who knows when to take over.

Beggars can't be chosers,
Or so the saying goes,
Someday, you may love me back, dear lover,
But who would ever know?

All I know, is right here, right now,
So kiss me, my lover,
With your lips above my brow,
And I shall be able to tell,
If I go to heaen,
Or if I go to hell.

You love me, dear lover! I know you do!
I felt the passion on your lips,
I knew it! I swear I knew!
Now place your hands upon my hips,
And kiss me your sweet sin,
I know I'll remember it always, until we meet again.

******So what do you think? I love it, but I wrote it...so let your voie ring out above the croud, and make a differance...erm...in my life! lol! But please, read it, rate it, and leave a essage, I'll get back to you as soon as I can...BEEP!



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