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 12-14-2005, 08:41 PM
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sorry i wrote this reply so late to your comments Isis. I just have one thing to say. I really like you suggestions. The one thing i think you said though with him landing there was too convinient. It's supposed to be convenient because the orb is supposed to be there and it pulled him right to it.
Thanks for your suggestions. __________________
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12-14-2005, 08:56 PM
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hey everyone. I have a chance of a life time. well actually a very slight chance of a life time to get this novel published! my dad just got one of his books published and now he says he's going to help me get this novel ready and then talk to his publisher. Since i just finished my 1st two chapters and you need 2 sample chapters to send into the publisher i need all the feedback i can get. so please help!
Thank you very much Kayla __________________
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12-15-2005, 01:42 PM
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CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i love it so far, i dont really have any corrections, but im sure that some one else will, once again CONGRATS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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12-15-2005, 03:30 PM
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Bravo, Bravo! you might want to check the spelling, but otherwise the story is Magnifico (lol I know i spelled it wrong, ironic huh.)
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