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Old Yesterday, 11:13 AM   #1
girlonfire
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Talking Maiden Chains

Its a shortie again...it another thing that "popped" into my head, though this on is a LOT older than 'angels'


With every cares and every stroke,
With every kiss you made and broke,
Still the maiden worships you,
She is bound by what you do,




?????coments anyone??????
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