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Old 04-09-2006, 01:48 PM   #1
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Talking Wishing- please review ty!

Two sixteenths' of my life i spend resenting,
Wishing i was somewhere else,
Trying to find equations,
Just a little more appealing,
So as i can cheat life,
Staring out the window,
For some bizzare miracle,
For fate to sweep me off my feet,
Because the sun out there,
Golden yellow,
So full of warmth...
And it's intoxicating,
I'm wanting to be out there so badly,
And i turn back to the teacher,
Turn back to the cold souls,
Next to me,
I wonder how i can learn this,
When all i want to do is sit in the sun and write,
And learn what it means to be happy,
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