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Old 05-25-2005, 09:02 AM   #1
~swissmochafudge~
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Default "Nightmare"



Black darkness
Echoes around my skull.
Numbing, controlling
My mind.

I fall,
An abyss opens before me,
I strain to run away away,
It's pulling me in.

Evil, mocking laughter
Echoes around the dark hole
A shiver raises
The goosebumps on my arm.

As I PLUNGE
Downward,
My soul is torn
Away from my body.

Cool sweat,
Like lemon ice
Purges all goodness.

And a scream!
High pitched and trembling,
Lingering,
Waiting.

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