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Old 01-07-2006, 10:41 PM   #11
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Hey!!! well im new to TeenLit and this was the first thing i read .. i dont really understand ur poem/dream.. though im only 13 so yea.. but idk in my opinion dreams..are sumtimes really ahrd for other people to understand. but thats just me. i bet some other ppl got ur poem.!!!!
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Old 01-07-2006, 10:44 PM   #12
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Well, welcome to TeenLit. However, as something that tries to emanulate a poem; it fails. I'd have to consult an expert surrealist or psychologist to get the dream right.
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Old 01-08-2006, 04:05 PM   #13
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Good point... dreams are hard to get just right.. but also... i think only the person who has the dream can really find the meaning.
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Old 05-02-2006, 08:53 AM   #14
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ohhh yuck....people keep saying dentists....i just get one hell of a kiss...sounds like you're making out dirty....tell me i'm not the only one who thought that....funny thing is i like it...thats so wrong
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Old 05-02-2006, 08:55 AM   #15
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oh....let me help you with that ( u sed u needed a phsycologist thingy to work it out)

its kinda bait...you wanna good snog soon and fast with sum 1 who isnt doing it for a secret bet
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Unwilling, stop putting yourself down, lol your poetry is good. esp. this one. I don't know why but the last two lines "i was only missing a nose when you left." reminded me of shel silverstein. but when i read it the picture i got was also a dentist, And, lol, the whole point of poetry is expressing yourself! "Yourself". meaning that no one can't 'get it'. there is no wrong image that poetry can create, it's the same with dreams. i don't think you should change it.
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Old 05-07-2006, 10:16 AM   #17
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Old 05-07-2006, 09:39 PM   #18
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While indeed that is a idealistic approach, your view-points on poetry being made, I have always been taught that it's what the readers ellicit from the poem itself; if it's capable of giving the reader an emotion. I'm ashamed because I rushed to make this poem without thinking about it.
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hey, are you going to rewrite any of this portfolio stuff?
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Old 05-08-2006, 09:49 AM   #20
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Its cool!

I love it how I don't know what the hell it is! Thats what dreams are..nice job putting it to paper.

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