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Old 06-04-2006, 06:43 PM   #1
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Default Pinned against the Earth.

PIN ME TO THE eARTH AND i AM,
(ME) WE ARE PaPEr - WHiTE PAPeR - DOLLS.
SnIPPED OUt OF (--sssnick!--) a LITtLE MORe THAN (what matters?) mATTER.
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Red face Cool

This is hard. I'm not sure what i want to say...its cool. I like it because it kind of fades in and out with back ground sounds n stuff. But the brackets confuse me a little babes...ah well, i like stuff i dont understand, i'm a bit warped that way...
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I'm like an atom,
So small you can not see me,
Insignificant?
Try and split me,
And i'm not so little anymore...
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