Roses for Winter ( a short story needing feedback)
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08-17-2005, 12:32 PM
Join Date: Aug 2005
Thanks for the help.
I can understand what you mean by it sounding immature. Maybe a larger variety of larger words will help that. I will definetly work on that part.
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