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Sempron101 · 08-17-2005, 12:32 PM

Vennilla,

Thanks for the help.
I can understand what you mean by it sounding immature. Maybe a larger variety of larger words will help that. I will definetly work on that part.

08-17-2005, 12:32 PM	#10
Sempron101 TeenLit Newbie Join Date: Aug 2005 Posts: 21	Vennilla, Thanks for the help. I can understand what you mean by it sounding immature. Maybe a larger variety of larger words will help that. I will definetly work on that part.