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Old 08-07-2006, 09:38 PM   #17
Eternity Falling
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*Jumps at Phantom wielding a spear!*
I like this too...but I wish it was a little more flushed is very deep...and has a lot of potential to be I would look at it in a few a different way..and expose it some more...

ôRemember tonight... for it is the beginning of always."--Dante Alighieri

My soul is full of whispered song;
My blindness is my sight;
The shadows that I feared so long
Are all alive with light.
~Alice Cary, Dying Hymn

If my doctor told me I had only six minutes to live, I wouldn't brood. I'd type a little faster." --Isaac Asimov

"I write for the same reason I breathe- Because if I didn't, I would die." --Isaac Asimov
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