I love this. It is real(istic)..even though it isn't. It seizes the attention of passerbys in its clutches with its first words.
Well done.
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“Remember tonight... for it is the beginning of always."--Dante Alighieri
My soul is full of whispered song;
My blindness is my sight;
The shadows that I feared so long
Are all alive with light.
~Alice Cary, Dying Hymn
If my doctor told me I had only six minutes to live, I wouldn't brood. I'd type a little faster." --Isaac Asimov
"I write for the same reason I breathe- Because if I didn't, I would die." --Isaac Asimov
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