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Old 08-07-2006, 09:20 PM   #4
Eternity Falling
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I love this. It is real(istic)..even though it isn't. It seizes the attention of passerbys in its clutches with its first words.
Well done.

ôRemember tonight... for it is the beginning of always."--Dante Alighieri

My soul is full of whispered song;
My blindness is my sight;
The shadows that I feared so long
Are all alive with light.
~Alice Cary, Dying Hymn

If my doctor told me I had only six minutes to live, I wouldn't brood. I'd type a little faster." --Isaac Asimov

"I write for the same reason I breathe- Because if I didn't, I would die." --Isaac Asimov
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